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by ~xXBuffoloSoldiersXx, Jul 12, 2011, 3:12:48 AM
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send me a note - you must write literature or poetry so therefore have a keen interest in writing to qualify

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White Picket FenceI don't have a home
But if you sprouted some shingles
Blue siding
White shutters
You could shelter me

Maybe we could fall in loveWhite Picket Fence by ~The-Virgin-Suicide

PuddlesAs a child I remember
Standing in the rain
Feeling like a river
Waiting to be soaked

We pretended to become
Raindrops on car windows
We put money on their races
And faith in their existence

I hope you taste like rain
Or the subtle creak of gates
Or palm leaves in the wind
Or the lips that love me so

If I tell you that I love you
Let me fall from this sky too
Drop from this Chicago tower
Be a puddle on the groundPuddles by ~The-Virgin-Suicide

It ExistsTwisting corridors took my breath
My pen and paper
My leather-bound kisses
And replaced it with the word beautiful
The word magic

(And I'm under your spell)

In breathlessness I did not die
But locked myself away
In a rent-free locker
And found the illogical love I believe in

I'm sick of drinking ink like water
But if right now
That's all I can say
Words have finally failed meIt Exists by ~The-Virgin-Suicide

At the BeachWhite caps and white sands

Your rough fingers laced in mine

Salt flavors our kissAt the Beach by ~NakedLobster0413

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Prose - Fiction

Ch. 2 of The Hidden Shadows by ~mysterywolfgurl

Preface to Blood KissesPREFACE

“I know the secret of your heart Sarah,” Jace said soothingly. “Your heart can’t lie, not to me,” he said, pulling me closer.
I stood there, my head against his chest, hearing his heart beat faster, and then I knew. We were meant for each other.
The offspring of Angel and Vampire, together, in perfect harmony.
We were meant to be enemies.
We turned out to be lovers.
And now, they might just destroy the world.
Ah, hell!Preface to Blood Kisses by ~mysterywolfgurl

Omni-Gaia 1Omni-Gaia trilogy
No one knows how, no one knows why, but one thing we all agree on is… this whole thing is the fault of man. We created them, but we had no idea, they would develop a mind of their own and start killing people.
This was one item we should've left on the drawing board.
What I don't understand is… how come only one of them went haywire? Why not the other forms?
But anyway, after we lost the battle for Gaia's survival, they started rounding us all up; putting us in these machines. Once plugged in, we had no knowledge of the real world. To tell ya the truth, we thought where we were now was the real world.
We have one iOmni-Gaia 1 by ~deviantfetishlver

Once Upon A Rainy DayThe rain fell in torrents outside, gliding towards the ground in thin, elusive sheets. Puddles began to gather everywhere and Judy wished she could join the children sloshing through them with excited yips and giggles. She laughed and shook her head at her own thoughts. Such a childish notion for a grown woman, she thought, a soft smile playing on her lips. She felt a small, familiar tug at her skirts and turned away from the rain, her mind shifting back to the cozy parlor and her small daughter, Lucy, who was now peering up at her with large, inquisitive eyes. They were the darkest shade of blue, almost violet, and mirrored her mother's own Once Upon A Rainy Day by ~NakedLobster0413

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Prose - Non-Fiction

SadnessBlack tears in my heart,
My eyes fading gray
My soul fighting the loneliness
No one understands my pain
Nobody can understand
This beating in my chest,
This throbbing in my head,
It all would leave,
If I were found dead
Maybe they're all right,
Everyone who has told me I am worthless
What if they are right?
And yet,
What if they aren't?
What if the friends I have think otherwise?
If I were to die, how many people would cry?
How many would mourn?
How many would go as far as to kill themselves,
Just to be with me?
With all these unanswered questions,
I've but one choice,
To stay alive
If the day should arrive that I shall Sadness by ~mysterywolfgurl

SoulA soul is a wolf

It howls for purpose

It cries for the lost

The soul barks with joy at the sound of another

It growls at an enemy

Sadly it whines

Casualties may cause it to hide

Untouchable skin

Sleek fur

It prowls night and day

A whisper of caress in the steely silver moonlight

Its fate is to die

It speaks an undecipherable language

It lays to rest in peace

Then reappears soundlessly

Once more

To play

Its howl is soul musicSoul by ~mysterywolfgurl

Jumbled Up Feelings What is love? Is it a feeling? An action? Can it be both joy and pain? A racing heart and a piercing thrum? When one love ends, can it truly ever have been called love? It takes years of dedication to build a strong feeling, but only seconds and one wrong choice to make it fall apart. Emotions are such fickle things. One day, I love my life and thank God for all the blessings in it. The next, I forget those blessings and hate it. Love in the real world is hard. The thought of finding a person, a different individual with separate feelings and thoughts, terrifies me. The thought of trusting him, opening my heart and body, and leaving myself vJumbled Up Feelings by ~NakedLobster0413

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Betrayal I am haunted.

That face looms over me,
Staring at me,
His eyes gone cold.

We used to be friends,
Fighting on the same side.
Why did you have to
Betray me in the end?

I am holding onto memories,
Brittle and fragile like glass.
Us laughing together,
Looking into your eyes.

We were friends,
And I trusted you.
I thought you would
Never betray me.

I should have listened,
Should have looked for another.
Now, my life is tumbling,
And I am crashing down.

It is too late.Betrayal by ~chibilvr091

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Forgive My IllnessMy OCD is annoying,
Some people think that, anyway.
Well, please forgive the fact
That my brain is different
Or that I can't concentrate.
I really hope that my
Way of thinking doesn't offend you.
I wouldn't want you to get hurt anymore.
And I'm so sorry that I'm not normal.
This must be so hard for you. Forgive My Illness by ~iamganontheumbreon

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AnxietyMy heart is stamped with words like "fragile" and "caution"
Brittle and easily broken
Emotion snarling from the inside, begging for a way out

"You're weak"

Thoughts ripping apart the seams
Doubts and worry assault my lungs as my throat closes in on itself
Panic slashes through my skin

"You're weak"Anxiety by ~LiebeTacos

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The Umbrella
I adored that store, and I relished walking to it every day. There was this one item that always caught my eye, although.It was beautiful, with sunlight glistening on the windowsill. But, there was always one item that caught my eye every time. It was this umbrella lying in the corner, with the wooden handle gently leaning against the window. It reminded me of my mother, and how she wore dresses of the same color when she was still alive. The dust covered the glimmer of its maroon color, but it still lied there like it had many years before. My mother had said to me when I was very young, "When we have enough money, I'll buy it." I was fiThe Umbrella by ~chibilvr091

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its hard to get noticed on deviant art when ur a writer or poet
WHY? because its so much easier 2 look at a pic than it is to read literature or poems

i admit i hav often skipped passed literature myself without bothering to read it
this makes it hard for literature 2 get noticed and publicise your work with nice constructive feedback, faves , pageveiws etc...

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~tavrospayne May 2, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

submitted to the wrong folder sorry

~Bitch0nline Jan 18, 2013

If you look into your random favorites here on this page the poem that reads "My Cunt" hmmm is that what you mean by potential?

read what your admin says in this group I would guess this has potential can I write one about my ass?

~MorningMelon Dec 13, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

My precious, I haven't even checked out your group gallery and it's not the quality of the group I'm complaining about, but a description with the words 'u' and 'ur' instead of you and your and a '2' instead of to, doesn't make for a very good image of a literature group.

*CluelessLlama13 Nov 29, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Hi. I don't really write. I don't even like writing very much, but I wrote this poem kinda out of nowhere, and I feel like I should share it with people because I feel like it's something everyone should learn/know. I honestly feel kind of funny taking credit for it, even though I know I wrote it. My mom says I was "inspired" or something.. Anyway, this poem really helped me through depression from about age 14-16. I figure there has to be some reason for it. So I want it to help others like it did me (and a few others I've shared it with) if possible.
Bottom line, I don't want to join any group I'm not going to contribute much to. But I wondered if I could somehow submit it or something anyway?
I realize this sounds pretty cheesy and pathetic, but I'm honestly just trying to save you an inactive member more than anything by asking this.
The actual poem is right here [link] if you'd like to read it. If I'm totally breaking the rules here, I completely understand. I merely want to throw it out there in hopes that it could benefit someone else. Thanks.

~Zander-cage Nov 4, 2012

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